very nice details but it could do with more lineweights and less with crosshatching. Also, try putting bolder lines on the outlines of the figures and let all the lines inside be smaller than those outer lines. Inkers are meant not just to make lines black but to redraw the original picture. Don't be afraid to change or even erase some of those lines in the inked version!
Did you use ink pens? Why not try out some brushes sometime? I've started doing it recently and it's a life changing experience!